Simple and funny
The look of your movie is very simple, but it's funny!
- the representation of a "blonde" :D
I didn't like:
- the character's voice, a little "muffled"
Simplicity is often best for short slice-of-lifes like this. I'll try to rig speakonia to make better clips, but some days it's just not reliable.
- some humorous elements
- the music
I didn't like
- the story (a short movie should have something like a surprising ending or it should bring a message)
- the drawing, too approximate
The Frog sacrifice itself to save the world...
...crazy, this movie is completely absurd, it's psychedelic, out of mind...
but overall it's attractive!!!
- choice and synchronization of the music with video (they've a great part in the attractiveness of the movie)
- the way you managed the animation effect, in particular transitions between "characters" and the way a "thing" rise from another "thing"
- your imagination!!!
A nice short, perfect to give a friend a smile!
Unexpected ending in one of the secret ingredients of short movies.
Congratulation, waiting for more stuff!
More stuff? I'd love to.
When? I cannot say.
But I have no intention of completely stopping, through best and worst. :)
Thanks for watching.
As an exercise is a good work, a good start.
I wait for something a lot more complex and attractive!
Don't open Flash only when you're bored :)
ok dude but u know it's not a start! i made chiken song maybe its cool and i made part 2 of shiken song without the help of my bro lol
Message in a SWF
Flash movies can carrying thorough ideas, your work is an excellent example.
It's brief and punchy.
Thanks and congratulation!
Wow, a chilling, at the same time comic, representation of Dependence's power and Cynicism!
Great animation, congratulation for characters' expressivity!
Only one note: final titles should pass a little bit slowly, to keep fluidity and allow reading all.
I really liked it!
Sweet story, great graphic, characters style like in the professional cartoon.
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