Simple and funny
The look of your movie is very simple, but it's funny!
I liked:
- the representation of a "blonde" :D
I didn't like:
- the character's voice, a little "muffled"
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Simple and funny
The look of your movie is very simple, but it's funny!
I liked:
- the representation of a "blonde" :D
I didn't like:
- the character's voice, a little "muffled"
Simplicity is often best for short slice-of-lifes like this. I'll try to rig speakonia to make better clips, but some days it's just not reliable.
Mmmmh...
I liked:
- some humorous elements
- the music
I didn't like
- the story (a short movie should have something like a surprising ending or it should bring a message)
- the drawing, too approximate
cheers
Good start
Your work it's a good start, you can get it better in many way.
Suggestions:
- adjust the constrast between background and animated elements, background now it's too bright
- draw it all better, get it look nicer
Better
This is certainly better than Winshows 95, but I'm sure you can do al lot more!
Take the time to add a lot of interactive items, complete "start" button and draw better some details like the broken display.
This time Winshows XXP has complete the start...
Congratulation
As your first game, it's really a good work!
It's fast and flowing, as an arcade shoteer had to be.
To let the game be played longer, I suggest a difficulty curve a little less steep.
Other suggestions:
- powerups, expecially energy
- lives
- changing background through levels
Note: at the end of match, the result shown was '0' instead of my real score, however I submitted it, and it was submitted the real result; this could be a little bug.
yea , i think I fixed that bug. I also had issues with explosion sounds, but i believe it to be working now.
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